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How does our brain work?
Introduction:
Our brains are amazing, I have conducted research to see
just how amazing brains really are.
just how amazing brains really are.
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How our brain works
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Our brain contains billions of nerve cells that coordinate
thoughts, emotions, behaviours and sensations.
A complicated system of nerves connect your brain to your body
so communications can be made in split seconds. The brain
works like a big computer. It processes information that it
receives from the senses and body, and sends the messages
back to the body.
thoughts, emotions, behaviours and sensations.
A complicated system of nerves connect your brain to your body
so communications can be made in split seconds. The brain
works like a big computer. It processes information that it
receives from the senses and body, and sends the messages
back to the body.
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How much of our brain do we use.
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People say that humans are only capable of using 10% of their
brain but that is a myth that an anonymous American started.
Although unidentified this person´s harmless statement caused
massive debates, until solved by Barry Gordon. I turns out
majority of our brain is active nearly all the time. If we did only
use 10% of our brains we wouldn't be able to;
understand basic math, remember anything short term, speak
properly, and much more like, exercising and even getting
dressed.
brain but that is a myth that an anonymous American started.
Although unidentified this person´s harmless statement caused
massive debates, until solved by Barry Gordon. I turns out
majority of our brain is active nearly all the time. If we did only
use 10% of our brains we wouldn't be able to;
understand basic math, remember anything short term, speak
properly, and much more like, exercising and even getting
dressed.
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What are our brains capable of?
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Your brain can do more than you think.
Our brains are amazing at adapting to our surroundings, memorizing words, pictures and numbers, calculating sentences and controlling your whole body overall. You can train your brain to do just about anything you want. If you read a book over and over 100 times it is very likely that you would be able to recite the book word for word, all because you trained your brain to memorize it.
Conclusion
Our brains are amazing and play a huge roll in our lives, Learning to understand our brain helps us understand how our brains work, how much of our brain we actually use and what our brain is capable of. Thanks for reading my amazing writing to explain writing piece.
Hi Allysse, I really like your writing but you could make the text smaller so its not as long. :)
ReplyDeletehi,i really like you peace of writing,it looks like you put a lot of time and effort into your writing I think that you will get a high score in it if you can memorise all of it.I learnt a lot off of it and I hope you get a good score!
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